Witness Men, Chapter One

I’m posting the rough draft of my current project, for a limited time only. Open to comments and suggestions. (For a limited time only!)



“What in the world?” The explorer, Richard Archbold, held the binoculars to his eyes. “I can’t believe it. Russ, do you see what I see?”

The pilot squinted out the window and nodded. Below them, in the huge valley along the river, lay small tan circles that could be nothing except grass-roofed huts. “I see them,” he said. “It’s not our imagination. Those are houses, all right.”


This chapter was up for about a week and was then removed. I hope you can enjoy the other chapters as I write them (and before I remove them!).

After that, I hope you’ll enjoy the book with your family when it comes into publication.

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2 comments on “Witness Men, Chapter One
  1. Rebecca says:

    from Katy Plemmons
    Submitted on 2011/07/29 at 11:27 am

    Wow, this is such an exciting beginning. To think that they thought they were the only people in the world, and then they are discovered, just gives me chills! What happens next….?

  2. Rebecca says:

    Submitted on 2011/08/02 at 4:39 pm | In reply to Katy Plemmons.

    Thanks for the encouragement, Katy! Second chapter coming before too long, I hope. . . .

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